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Abdu P Posted 12 years ago
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Really happy to say thanks to all who attended the First practice match on Saturday. It was a great opportunity to our members to show their talent. We can proudly say that we are all satisfied with each one of your performance including some massive batting performance from Mr. F & S and bowling performance from S & D. Seeking the same performance in our future games.
I would like to take this opportunity to say thanks to all for giving oppertunity to me and Shirin to lead our team. We promise our full effort and ability to make our team better.
  

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Thank you to all who attended the first practice match on Saturday. It was a great opportunity for our members to show their talent. We can proudly say that we were all happy with everyone's performance—including some massive batting from Mr F & Mr S and bowling from S & D.

— Mister Micawber

  • Thank you to all who attended the first practice match on Saturday.
  • It was a great opportunity for our members to show their talent.
  • We can proudly say that we were all happy with everyone's performance—including some massive batting from Mr F & Mr S and bowling from S & D.
  • We hope that everyone performs as well in our future games.
  • I would also like to take this opportunity to thank you all for giving Shirin and me the opportunity to lead our team.
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Thank you to all who attended the first practice match on Saturday. It was a great opportunity for our members to show their talent. We can proudly say that we were all happy with everyone's performance—including some massive batting from Mr F & Mr S and bowling from S & D. We hope that everyone performs as well in our future games.

I would also like to take this opportunity to
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