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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Can any one check it.
I'm making a website for a construction company. Can you check my english, is everything ok or may be I schould change.
" We provide hight quality service for all of ours clients. Our priority is your satisfaction and our job is not done before we reach that goal. We are trusted and experience.
We have done over few hundred projects. Some of them were complicated, other ones very simple, another one was a detailed work. We did it all of them. There is no job for us, what we can't take it and do it right.
We realize the money is important to you and we know how to save up your time and leave some green in your pocket. This is not just a slogan its part of our strategy. You have a family and friends and some day they are going to ask you who made your kitchen, bath or deck this way. And we know you are going to be proud to tell them about us. "
"For us, your opinion is the most important. We always go with your wish and give you 100% of our experience. We truly understand your position as a client and we are going to help you go through this difficult process."
"Quality of our work is excellent. We are taking responsibility for that and we promise we won't disappoint you. We don't take short cuts. As a proof of our word, we prepared small gallery to make you feel right choosing us."
"We don't hide any think from you and we won't disappear if there is a problem. For us problems doesn't exist and it's only challenge to face out. You can call us any time, we are here to listen and dispel your fears."
" Over those years we satisfy a lot of people. We completed hundred of projects and 99.9% it was our small success. "
"My name is ..., I'm the owner of the ..... I've been doing construction job for over 20 years and in 2003 I decided to open my own business.
I have advanced a reputation for being hearty and truthfully, providing high quality work and for completing projects ahead of schedule. Becouse of my reputation I'm busy all over the year. Most of my projects comes from repeat customers or from word of mouth recommendations."
Thank you for your help and understanding.
" We provide hight quality service for all of ours clients. Our priority is your satisfaction and our job is not done before we reach that goal. We are trusted and experience.
We have done over few hundred projects. Some of them were complicated, other ones very simple, another one was a detailed work. We did it all of them. There is no job for us, what we can't take it and do it right.
We realize the money is important to you and we know how to save up your time and leave some green in your pocket. This is not just a slogan its part of our strategy. You have a family and friends and some day they are going to ask you who made your kitchen, bath or deck this way. And we know you are going to be proud to tell them about us. "
"For us, your opinion is the most important. We always go with your wish and give you 100% of our experience. We truly understand your position as a client and we are going to help you go through this difficult process."
"Quality of our work is excellent. We are taking responsibility for that and we promise we won't disappoint you. We don't take short cuts. As a proof of our word, we prepared small gallery to make you feel right choosing us."
"We don't hide any think from you and we won't disappear if there is a problem. For us problems doesn't exist and it's only challenge to face out. You can call us any time, we are here to listen and dispel your fears."
" Over those years we satisfy a lot of people. We completed hundred of projects and 99.9% it was our small success. "
"My name is ..., I'm the owner of the ..... I've been doing construction job for over 20 years and in 2003 I decided to open my own business.
I have advanced a reputation for being hearty and truthfully, providing high quality work and for completing projects ahead of schedule. Becouse of my reputation I'm busy all over the year. Most of my projects comes from repeat customers or from word of mouth recommendations."
Thank you for your help and understanding.
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I have underlined some problem areas and struck out useless verbiage: " We provide hight quality service for all of ours clients. Our priority is your satisfaction and our job is not done before we reach that goal. We are trusted and experience .
- I have underlined some problem areas and struck out useless verbiage: " We provide hight quality service for all of ours clients.
- Our priority is your satisfaction and our job is not done before we reach that goal.
- We are trusted and experience .
- We have done over few hundred projects.
- Some of them were complicated, other ones very simple, another one was a detailed work .
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I have underlined some problem areas and struck out useless verbiage:
" We provide hight quality service for all of ours clients. Our priority is your satisfaction and our job is not done before we reach that goal. We are trusted and experience.
We have done over few hundred projects. Some of them were complicated, other ones very simple,
" We provide hight quality service for all of ours clients. Our priority is your satisfaction and our job is not done before we reach that goal. We are trusted and experience.
We have done over few hundred projects. Some of them were complicated, other ones very simple,
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