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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Can any expert help me to correct my motivation letter??
hi can anyone help me to correct my motivation letter given below??pls its urgent:
Motivation Letter
I am writing this letter to express my interest in applying for a Master's Degree Programme in “Electric Power Engineering” starting in autumn 2010. As for as my previous background is concerned, I have been a good student and I am sure that it can help me to make a strong participation at your prestigious University.
If I recall my academic carrier up to my graduation level studies, I feel that I have been an active student both in extra curricular activities and academic activities. I have been the member of Student Advisory Centre and member of cricket team of university. During my B.Sc Electrical Engineering, I worked on project “Load Flow Study in ”. I was also assigned a project to inquire about the “Fault Occur in 132KV Grid Station”. By continuing further studies, I believe that I can enhance my knowledge and experience capabilities through academic research. I strongly believe that Master’s in “Electric Power Engineering” can guide me through all aspects of this field.
The reason for selecting this particular programme is that I want to get a depth in knowledge concerning power system. Considering the best educational system and environment in your university and the Master Degree Programme in which I am applying, it will really help me to provide a strong grip over my knowledge and practical experience and I will be able to use it in practical field with more confidence. Moreover, if I get selected for this programme in this university, I would have an opportunity to study with people from different countries and building relationships with them which can be useful for me in future life
I look forward to join Master Degree Programme in “Electric Power Engineering” to enhance my knowledge and practical capabilities. It will be really fortunate for me to be selected.
Best regards
Motivation Letter
I am writing this letter to express my interest in applying for a Master's Degree Programme in “Electric Power Engineering” starting in autumn 2010. As for as my previous background is concerned, I have been a good student and I am sure that it can help me to make a strong participation at your prestigious University.
If I recall my academic carrier up to my graduation level studies, I feel that I have been an active student both in extra curricular activities and academic activities. I have been the member of Student Advisory Centre and member of cricket team of university. During my B.Sc Electrical Engineering, I worked on project “Load Flow Study in ”. I was also assigned a project to inquire about the “Fault Occur in 132KV Grid Station”. By continuing further studies, I believe that I can enhance my knowledge and experience capabilities through academic research. I strongly believe that Master’s in “Electric Power Engineering” can guide me through all aspects of this field.
The reason for selecting this particular programme is that I want to get a depth in knowledge concerning power system. Considering the best educational system and environment in your university and the Master Degree Programme in which I am applying, it will really help me to provide a strong grip over my knowledge and practical experience and I will be able to use it in practical field with more confidence. Moreover, if I get selected for this programme in this university, I would have an opportunity to study with people from different countries and building relationships with them which can be useful for me in future life
I look forward to join Master Degree Programme in “Electric Power Engineering” to enhance my knowledge and practical capabilities. It will be really fortunate for me to be selected.
Best regards
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You can also add this: Furthermore I have also been involved in the extra-curricular roles at the . This involved meeting students from groups in order to collect issues. However, try getting a family member or a friend to proof read for you, it really helps.
- You can also add this: Furthermore I have also been involved in the extra-curricular roles at the .
- This involved meeting students from groups in order to collect issues.
- However, try getting a family member or a friend to proof read for you, it really helps.
- Hope that helps!!!!!!!
- Saira
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'as for as my previous back ground is concerned' that does not make sense change it for 'in regards to my previous background i have ...You can also add this:
Furthermore I have also been involved in the extra-curricular roles at the . I represented my peers from my cohort at the student advisory centre.This involved meeting students from groups in order to collect issues.
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Furthermore I have also been involved in the extra-curricular roles at the . I represented my peers from my cohort at the student advisory centre.This involved meeting students from groups in order to collect issues.
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