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Polojafri Posted 7 years ago
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Can any body plz correct these sentences?
Recently, the whole country was shocked after the sudden death of more than 150 children and fallen critically ill double than death number in Muzaffarpur.
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Recently, the whole country was shocked after the sudden death of more than 150 children. - That part is good. The rest makes no sense to me.
- Recently, the whole country was shocked after the sudden death of more than 150 children.
- - That part is good.
- The rest makes no sense to me.
- Can you write it in a different way?
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Recently, the whole country was shocked after the sudden death of more than 150 children. -
That part is good. The rest makes no sense to me. Can you write it in a different way?
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