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Paraman Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Can any body of you correct my sentances?



Hi everybody,
I have a very poor write-ups in my website about th personal profile.. i wanted to change the text can anybody of you correct or standardise my paragaraphs?

Thanks in advance.

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I am a 1994 graduate from Yadava College Madurai. Those days we spent in the college were unforgettable. I still remember all my friends studied in my class and those stayed with me in the hostel.

After completing my graduation, I have decided to go for a computer studies which I thought will earn me a good job for the future. As decided I have joint in Aptech computer education center for the higher diploma in software engineering course. It was a two years diploma, which made me a full time computer professional, first as a computer faculty, then a web programmer and finally now I am working as a Project Manager in an ERP Application development.
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I am a 1994 graduate of Yadava College (Madurai Kamaraj University ). My college days are unforgettable. I still remember with fondness all my friends in my classes and those who stayed with me in our hostel.

— Mister Micawber

  • I am a 1994 graduate of Yadava College (Madurai Kamaraj University ).
  • My college days are unforgettable.
  • I still remember with fondness all my friends in my classes and those who stayed with me in our hostel.
  • After graduation , I decided to pursue computer studies , which I thought would help me find a good job in the future , and I enrolled at the Aptech Computer Education Center for their higher diploma in Software Engineering.
  • This two-year diplom a helped me become a full-time computer professional, first on a computer faculty, then as a web programmer , and now as a Project Manager in ERP application development.
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I am a 1994 graduate of Yadava College (Madurai Kamaraj University). My college days are unforgettable. I still remember with fondness all my friends in my classes and those who stayed with me in our hostel.

After graduation, I decided to pursue computer studies, which I thought would
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oh, Thanks friend,

I love the way you have written it. I should practice to bring the words like this. can you please recommend me from where i can start? (link to any article, lessions?, quiz.?)

hope i am not bothering you.

Thanks.
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No bother at all, Paraman, but there are really no discrete articles or lessons on writing naturally-- it is just the outcome of practice and study of the language, a combination of vocabulary, grammar structure and style.

Feel free to post any specific questions that you have in our forums.
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