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Alc24 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Can a native speaker help correct sentences please?

Would a native please help me make these natural?


1 I got/made you save money.

2 He doesn't kiss me as much/as many as I kiss her.

3 I can stay until 4pm at which time I have to go/will have to go home.

4 Which shirt is this? Is this the one I bought in NY or did I buy it here?

5 You could have been/gotten ready to leave when I arrived but you weren't.

6 Not once has this box not been empty./Not once this box has not been empty.

Thank you
  

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1 I got you to /made you save money. 2 He doesn't kiss me as much/as often as I kiss her. 3 I can stay until 4pm , at which time I have to go/will have to go home.

  • 1 I got you to /made you save money.
  • 2 He doesn't kiss me as much/as often as I kiss her.
  • 3 I can stay until 4pm , at which time I have to go/will have to go home.
  • 4 Which shirt is this?
  • Is this the one I bought in NY , or did I buy it here?
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1 I got you to/made you save money.

2 He doesn't kiss me as much/as often as I kiss her.

3 I can stay until 4pm, at which time I have to go/will have to go home.

4 Which shirt is this? Is this the one I bought in NY, or did I buy it here?

5 You could have been/gotten ready to leave when I arrived,
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Mister Micawber2 He doesn't kiss me as much/as often as I kiss her.
Threesomes can get so complicated!
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khoffThreesomes can get so complicated!
My lips are sealed!
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Mister MicawberMy lips are sealed!
Hmmm -- how are you managing to kiss her so often, then?
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Thank you Mister Micawber

For number 2 I didn't mean that at all

I meant the wife tells her husband "you don't kiss me as much as I kiss you on a day to day basis"

What the difference between the sentences in 5 please?

Thank you
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2 He doesn't kiss me as much/as often as I kiss him.

5a You could have been ready to leave when I arrived, but you weren't.-- When I arrived, you weren't ready to go.

5b You could have gotten ready to leave when I arrived, but you didn't.-- When I arrrived, you didn't begin preparing to go.

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