Can a native help me correct these sentences?

Could you please help me correct these sentences please? I can't find anything wrong with them, but I don't know if they read well?

- Was it worth not having to having to pay 40 dollars to do that.

- He'll scream at you for doing that if anything.

- The test has 3 section, meaning you'll get 3 sub scores that are put together to get one final score.

- The more I carry the luggage the uglier my attitude will get.

- The only time she's any fun is when she's on vacation.

- I'd rather have him around than not.

- We saved 30 dollars by taking the bus rather than the cab.

- He only goes to one restaurant which by the way isn't all the good.

- People who go to hotels have to put down the hotel's address on the sheet of paper.

- Even if one/people who plan(s) on staying in the country, one has to buy a round trip ticket if he's not a citizen.

- I 'm seeing blurry. There must be something in my eye.

Thank you so much