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Beopro Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Came home drunk
1. Last night she came home drunk and shot her dog one leg crippled and kicked it so hard that her dog had to be hospitalized/that her hubby had to take it to the hospital for an emergency.
Is this sentence grammatical and ok to say?
Thank you very much, Teachers
Beopro
Is this sentence grammatical and ok to say?
Thank you very much, Teachers
Beopro
Top answer
Hi, No. Try to rewrite it as two or more separate sentences. The phrase 'one leg crippled' needs work.
- Hi, No.
- Try to rewrite it as two or more separate sentences.
- The phrase 'one leg crippled' needs work.
- We take animals to the vet, not to the hospital.
- Post your revised version.
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Hi,
No. Try to rewrite it as two or more separate sentences.
The phrase 'one leg crippled' needs work.
We take animals to the vet, not to the hospital.
Post your revised version. OK?
No. Try to rewrite it as two or more separate sentences.
The phrase 'one leg crippled' needs work.
We take animals to the vet, not to the hospital.
Post your revised version. OK?
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Dear Clive!
- This is my rewrittten version
"Last night she came home drunk and shot her dog's left leg and it be
- This is my rewrittten version
"Last night she came home drunk and shot her dog's left leg and it be
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Hi,
"Last night she came home drunk and shot her dog's left leg and it became one-leg crippled dog. She also kicked the dog so hard that her husband had to take it to the vet for an emergency."
"Last night she came home drunk and shot her dog in the left leg. She permanently crippled it. She also kicked the dog so h
"Last night she came home drunk and shot her dog's left leg and it became one-leg crippled dog. She also kicked the dog so hard that her husband had to take it to the vet for an emergency."
"Last night she came home drunk and shot her dog in the left leg. She permanently crippled it. She also kicked the dog so h
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