Nowadays, music has become an important part of human’s life. Some people believed that music has a power which can bring people around the world together. Personally, I in every aspect agree with this for the reasons that follow.
To begin with, it is a fact beyond dispute that music rhythm brings people a number of emotions such as happy or sad. In other words, this can lead persons who have the same feeling together despite the difference in ages and cultures. A survey has shown that people who use music to share their emotions are happy than others. As a result, human can come together by sharing their feelings via music.
Another point of view is that there is no denying that a song can express the thought of a large number of persons. That is to say, people do not need to live in the same culture to have the same desire, belief or thoughts. Consequently, a song which has the content that suitable for many people thought can bring them together in other to build a community that can share their wants. For example, a charity organization use Heal The World song to express the desire of people about a world where there are no wars and people live in peace.
To conclude then, I am convinced to assert that music is the best path to bring people on earth together no matter who or how old they are.
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