Cambridge English 14 - Test 1 Witing Task 1

Question

The data given in the pie charts displayed the proportion of three nutrients kinds in a common meal in USA.

Overall, the most significant ratios belong to dinner for sodium and fat; meanwhile, snacks have the greatest amount of added sugar.

It can be seen from the first pie chart is that the amount of sodium in dinner occupies the largest fraction at 43%. Follow by lunch with 29% and the smallest percent is represented by breakfasts and snacks at 14%.

What is worth mention about the second chart is that saturated fat in dinner still account for the greatest fraction the same as sodium at 37%. Coming next are lunch and snacks with 26% and 21% respectively. The least remarkable ratio is made up by breakfast with 16%.

Lastly, it is possible to see from that last pie chart is that it is snacks that formed the most considerable amount of added sugar at 42%. It is followed by dinner and breakfast at 23% and lunch at 19%. Breakfast shown the least considerable proportion at 16%.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

Comment: This is a very poorly worded test. The only possible interpretation is the percentage division of the daily average intake of three unhealthy nutrients over three meals and between-meal snacks eaten by Americans

Duy Ðiên Ð?oThe data given in the pie charts displayed the proportion of three nutrients kinds in a common meal in USA.

That is

Duy Ðiên Ð?oThe data given in the pie charts displayed the proportion of three nutrients kinds in a common meal in USA.

That is not a good sentence. There are many problems.

The data given in the pie charts displayed (use present tense) the proportion of three nutrients kinds (wrong expression) in a common meal (Wrong observation. There are three meals and food eaten in between meals) in USA. (wrong expression. the USA)

Model sentence:

1. Tell the reader the number of charts and what each chart has:

Three pie charts, labelled sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar,

2. Next, tell the reader how the pie chart is divided

show the percentage of that nutrient consumed in each of four meals in a typical day.
3. Next tell the time frame or the geographical frame and the categories:

This data is from the average American diet.

Model paragraph:

Three pie charts, labelled sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar, show the percentage of that nutrient consumed in each of four meals in a typical day. This data is from the average American diet which consists of breakfast, lunch, dinner, and in-between meal snacks.

I don't have time for the rest of the essay. Maybe later today I can come back to it.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Overall, the most significant ratios belong to dinner for sodium and fat; meanwhile, snacks have the greatest amount of added sugar.

Model paragraph:

Overall, the typical American gets most of their saturated fat and sodium in the evening meal. Their snacks have the greatest proportion of added sugars. Breakfast is the healthiest meal with moderate amounts of these three unhealthy nutrients.

~~It can be seen from~~ (Just describe the data without extra unnecessary words.) The first pie chart has the proportions of sodium. ~~is that the amount of sodium in~~ Dinner ~~occupies~~ has the largest fraction at 43%, followed by lunch with 29%. The smallest percent is in ~~represented by~~ breakfasts and snacks at 14% each.

~~What is worth mention about~~ (Just describe the data without extra unnecessary words.) the second chart is that saturated fat in dinner still account for the greatest fraction the same as sodium at 37%. Coming next are lunch and snacks with 26% and 21% respectively. The least remarkable ratio is made up by breakfast with 16%.

Lastly, ~~it is possible to see from that~~ (Just describe the data without extra unnecessary words.) last pie chart is that it is snacks that formed the most considerable amount of added sugar at 42%. It is followed by dinner and breakfast at 23% and lunch at 19%. Breakfast shown the least considerable proportion at 16%.

Cambridge English 14 - Test 1 Witing Task 1

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