Cambridge 7 Writing Task 1
The Graph indicated that the used of fish and aminal meat of European State during the period from 1979 to 2004
Overall, It is evident that the consumption of animal meat consider fluctuated and The fish was stable from 1979 to 1984.
First of all, Between period 1979 to 1989, The propotion used of food as beef strongly fluctuated, In contrast the Chicken was sharply increased and the lamb was slightly go down.
Afterwards, During 1989 to 2004, the Consumpt of beef was sharply decreased, Meanwhile The Chicken was continued to go up and The lamp highly dropped. In addition, the Fish was slightly Stable during 1979 to 2004.
Please Help me comment which the mistake I had made, and Please Let me know Which band I would Get ? Thank you so much!!!
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I did not mark all the errors. I marked punctuation, capitalization, spelling and major grammatical errors. There are more errors which I did not mark.
- I did not mark all the errors.
- I marked punctuation, capitalization, spelling and major grammatical errors.
- There are more errors which I did not mark.
- The band score would be about 4.
- The G raph indicated that the used of fish and aminal meat of European State during the period from 1979 to 2004 (missing punctuation) Overall, I t is evident that the consumption of animal meat consider fluctuated and T he fish was stable from 1979 to 1984.
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I did not mark all the errors. I marked punctuation, capitalization, spelling and major grammatical errors.
There are more errors which I did not mark. The band score would be about 4.
The Graph indicated that the used of fish and aminal
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