Cambridge 13 - test 4 - writing part 1 - Please give me your comments!

Recently there have been loads of innovations about agricultural technologies, however, the number of people who do not have enough foods is still countable. This essay will dig deeplier the causes of this problems and what can be done for tackling the issue.

Most of the new inventions in agriculture serve for profitable purposes. New technologies are introduced to increase the product quality results the increase of the market price. The more enterprises apply new technologies, the less affordable products are available in the market for the poor. In addition, the undeveloped countries do not have enough budget for the operation of new invention and even purchasing it. For instance, the watering automatic machines require a certain amount of money to install, running and maintain. Moreover, the new technologies need a well-educated workforce to run, while the educational system in undeveloped countries are not able to train for them.

However, if governmental organizations encourages the increase of productivity and the quality as well to assure the low price products and the premium ones are available, the poor residents will be able to purchase their foods by their own income. Morover, the undeveloped countries should take part in the global agricultural organizations for enhancing the knowledge and technology exchange. Some develping countries can support the undeveloped ones by sharing new innovations and installing cost, which help build stonger relations and among countries in the world.

In conclusion, although many regions in the world are experiencing the problem of lacking of goods, the feasible solutions are available and can be applied with the support of other developing countries.

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