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L3lack_light Posted 13 years ago
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Call for help in proofreading a sentence
Will you please help me figure out what is wrong with my sentence?
Thank you in advance.
"Having a peaceful childhood with stable conditions, as well as inexposure to traumas, leads to a proper and balanced personality in the future, with less vulnerability for tensions."
Thank you in advance.
"Having a peaceful childhood with stable conditions, as well as inexposure to traumas, leads to a proper and balanced personality in the future, with less vulnerability for tensions."
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I think I would use vulnerability to tensions at the end, and depending on the exact sense of the word I intended I might make it tension . You can judge if you mean it here as a general condition, or as a set of problems. Other than that, looks fine to me.
- I think I would use vulnerability to tensions at the end, and depending on the exact sense of the word I intended I might make it tension .
- You can judge if you mean it here as a general condition, or as a set of problems.
- Other than that, looks fine to me.
- Hope this helps.
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I think I would use vulnerability to tensions at the end, and depending on the exact sense of the word I intended I might make it tension. You can judge if you mean it here as a general condition, or as a set of problems.
Other than that, looks fine to me.
Hope this helps.
Other than that, looks fine to me.
Hope this helps.
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