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Addyaddy Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

cakes and pastries

He doesn't like cakes, but instead, he likes pastries.
He doesn't like cakes, but instead likes pastries.

Have I punctuated these correctly?
  

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Yes. I wouldn't use a comma in the second example, though.

  • Yes.
  • I wouldn't use a comma in the second example, though.
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Yes. I wouldn't use a comma in the second example, though.
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I think i'd prefer

He doesn't like cakes but he likes pastries instead.
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Is this sentence correctly punctuated?

He doesn't like cakes but likes pastries.
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addyaddyIs this sentence correctly punctuated?
He doesn't like cakes but likes pastries.
Yeah, you don't need a comma here.
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He doesn't like cakes, but, instead, he likes pastries.

I think the "instead" is a non-essential component. What do you think?
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addyaddyHe doesn't like cakes, but, instead, he likes pastries.
addyaddy,
In this sentence, you really don't need "but" and "instead' in the same breath.
This sounds natural to me: He doesn't like cakes but he likes pastries. No commas.
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Hi,
addyaddyHe doesn't like cakes, but instead, he likes pastries.He doesn't like cakes, but instead likes pastries.Have I punctuated these correctly?
Instead is used inappropriately in your sentences. They are not good English, in my opinion.

Consider these ones:

He doesn't like cakes, but he likes pastries.

He doesn't like c

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