You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day.. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter:

explain what you like about the cafeteria

say what is wrong with it

suggest how it could be improved

Dear sir,

I am writing this letter ti have your attention about our college cafeteria. Let me explain in detail.

I am a freshment and my major is marketing. everyday, I usually do lunch with my friends at cafeteria. I prefer going to there because it has so delicious foods and the price is affordable. The seller is so kind and friendly that satisfy me so much.

however, I think that our cafeteria has something should be improved. The area is so small that we do not have enough space to eat so we have to take away our food. this is quite inconvenient. Moreover, the menu is not have so many food that we do not have much choices. Some foods appear everyday and we will fed up with it.

To improved these problem, in my opinion, we should build more free area for student to eat, expand our area to the larger and fresher. we should call more chiefs so they will make more foods for our cafeteria and it will attract more people.

that is my idea and I am looking forward to hearing from you.

LisaDear sir, Dear sir,
I am writing this letter ti have your attention about our college cafeteria. Let me explain in detail.
I am a freshment and my major is marketing. Everyday, I usually do lunch with my friends at cafeteria. I prefer going to there because it has so delicious foods and the price is affordable. The seller is so kind and friendly that satisfy me so much.
however, I think that our cafeteria has something should be improved. The area is so small that we do not have enough space to eat so we have to take away our food. This is quite inconvenient. Moreover, the menu is not have so many food that we do not have much choices. Some foods appear everyday and we will fed up with it.
To improved these problem, in my opinion, we should build more free area for student to eat, expand our area to the larger and fresher. We should call more chiefs so they will make more foods for our cafeteria and it will attract more people.
That is my idea and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Lisa
I am writing this letter ti have your attention about our college cafeteria. Let me explain in detail.
I am a freshment and my major is marketing. Everyday, I usually do lunch with my friends at cafeteria. I prefer going to there because it has so delicious foods and the price is affordable. The seller is so kind and friendly that satisfy me so much.
however, I think that our cafeteria has something should be improved. The area is so small that we do not have enough space to eat so we have to take away our food. This is quite inconvenient. Moreover, the menu is not have so many food that we do not have much choices. Some foods appear everyday and we will fed up with it.
To improved these problem, in my opinion, we should build more free area for student to eat, expand our area to the larger and fresher. We should call more chiefs so they will make more foods for our cafeteria and it will attract more people.
That is my idea and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Lisa