CAE again

0Hello teachers of EnglishForward, I've been so impulsive to sign up for CAE in June.02br
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00I went to the British Institute in my town to test my level, and they said I could try with CAE: but they didn't test my writing!!!02br
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00I've never written anything in English really, so you can immagine how bad my writing is.02br
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00I'm trying to write something every week, I'll be really gratefull if somebody could correct me.02br
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00You already did it one week ago: thanks a lot.02br
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00I'm practising on some CAE pastpapers. I hope it's fine if I don't write the tasks, but they are very long.02br
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00Thank you in any case (can I say this?).02br
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00Chiara02br
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00Dear Editor of 00 News,02br
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00my name is Maria Rossini, I hope you can help me.02br
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00I’ve just come back from a beautiful trip to Asia, 0100Australia0200 and 00. 02br
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00There is no doubt you live in a beautiful country!02br
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00I enjoyed my trip very much, but unfortunately nothing is perfect, and when arrived in 00’s bus station, 02br
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00my 00backpack got00 00lost or was stolen. I reported this to the police, but nothing could be done.02br
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00I can’t describe my surprise yesterday when the door's bell rang and the postman gave me 02br
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00my backpack straight in my hands! Someone sent it to me from 00, leaving02br
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00an unsigned note saying that he/she found it under a bush near 00’s beach.02br
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00That’s why I’m writing here.02br
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00Firstly I would like to thank this person and express him/her my gratitude02br
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00for what he/she did. I hope he/she contacts me to thank him/her personally and to give 02br
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00him/her back the money of the sending expenses, which must not have been law! 00 02br
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00Also, while the backpack has been found, my passport is still missing. It could be near 02br
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00’s beach, I don’t know. But wherever it is, if somebody finds it, he/she can write to 02br
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00me at the address below or contact 00’s police. 02br
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00Thank you for the opportunity you gave to write in your newspaper.02br
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00Yours sincerely,02br
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00Maria Rossini02br
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00To Auckland Police Department,02br
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00my name is Maria Rossini, 02br
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00on 14.04.’99 I reported to you that my backpack was lost.02br
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00Its reference number is MG/JE/148.02br
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00I write to inform you that the backpack has been found, but my passport, 02br
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00O-H-65839, is still missing.00 02br
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00Please contact me if you find it. I’ll pay for the sending expenses.02br
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00Yours sincerely,02br
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00Maria Rossin0-