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Sun 94 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

By relating it to...

When you write a formal research paper, if you want to discuss some policies by giving an example, which expression is better: by relating it to .. or by giving an example.

This paper explores the advantages and disadvantages of two economic policds by giving an example of financial crisis in the U.S. ( or by relating it to the financial crisis in the U.S?)
  

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They are two different propositions and are not interchangeable-- nor does either sound particularly felicitous here. I suggest this: This paper explores the advantages and disadvantages of two economic policies by examining the financial crisis in the US .

  • They are two different propositions and are not interchangeable-- nor does either sound particularly felicitous here.
  • I suggest this: This paper explores the advantages and disadvantages of two economic policies by examining the financial crisis in the US .
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They are two different propositions and are not interchangeable-- nor does either sound particularly felicitous here. I suggest this:

This paper explores the advantages and disadvantages of two economic policies by examining the financial crisis in the US.

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