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PreciousJones Posted 14 years ago
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She's been doing so well, let's not pollute it by spitting such dreadful afterthoughts.

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Yours is a run-on (comma-splice) sentence error. Please correct it. It also has some very strange vocabulary ( pollute, spit, afterthought ), so try different vocabulary.

  • Yours is a run-on (comma-splice) sentence error.
  • Please correct it.
  • It also has some very strange vocabulary ( pollute, spit, afterthought ), so try different vocabulary.
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Yours is a run-on (comma-splice) sentence error. Please correct it. It also has some very strange vocabulary (pollute, spit, afterthought), so try different vocabulary.
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Mister MicawberYours is a run-on (comma-splice) sentence error. Please correct it. It also has some very strange vocabulary (pollute, spit, afterthought), so try different vocabulary.
She's been doing so well, so let's not ruin it by spitting such dreadful afterthoughts.

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I'm trying to say that my friend who is c

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