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Tania77maria Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Buyer's responsability



I would appreciate corrections and suggestions in the paragraph below



The buyer is responsible for the personnel training in the risks of accidents at workplace, for the available devices for his/ her workers’ security, for the noise emission risks and for avoiding accidents at work according to the regulations established by the European Directives and by the laws of the country where the machine goes to.



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I would make a few changes (mostly to improve the parallelism). Boldface are my additions. The buyer is responsible for the personnel training personnel in the risks of accidents at the workplace, for providing the available necessary devices for his/ her workers' security, for reducing the noise emission risks, and for avoiding accidents at work according to the regulations established by the European Directives and by the laws of the country where the machine goes to is placed .

— Doctor D

  • I would make a few changes (mostly to improve the parallelism).
  • Boldface are my additions.
  • The buyer is responsible for the personnel training personnel in the risks of accidents at the workplace, for providing the available necessary devices for his/ her workers' security, for reducing the noise emission risks, and for avoiding accidents at work according to the regulations established by the European Directives and by the laws of the country where the machine goes to is placed .
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I would make a few changes (mostly to improve the parallelism). Boldface are my additions.

The buyer is responsible for the personnel training personnel in the risks of accidents at the workplace, for providing the available necessary devices for his/ her workers' security, for reducing the noise emis
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Thank you for your help.
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