Button poetry
Love is life
We all need happiness, to feed our souls...
so
we need love...
Love is a big word
and
It has many meanings
When I talk about love
I mean my family
my grandma
my pets
and...
My friends
That love to my favorite meal
or...
Favorite place
or...
That old city at night
That sunny day
Gives me a warm feeling
Or
that rainy morning...
It gives life to everything...
Even me
When I look at my birds or feed them
I feel so happy and blessed...
These little things
make me feel happy and loved
When I walk in my city at night
I feel reassured...
So calm and beautiful city
It makes me feel happy
When I talk with my family
or my friends...
I feel how strong and powerful I am...
They make me feel loved and important.
All these little things make me feel so happy
these details in my life
complete me...
And
make me so happy and lucky.
Top answer
Before anything else, get rid of all the ellipses—they are both misused and irritating. Punctuate poetry just as you would punctuate narrative. Next, eliminate the random line breaks—they are ineffective and are obviously just a gimmick to make your writing look like poetry.
- Before anything else, get rid of all the ellipses—they are both misused and irritating.
- Punctuate poetry just as you would punctuate narrative.
- Next, eliminate the random line breaks—they are ineffective and are obviously just a gimmick to make your writing look like poetry.
- After you have done those things, look at your work again and consider whether it is poetic or just a paragraph of sentimental ruminations.
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Before anything else, get rid of all the ellipses—they are both misused and irritating. Punctuate poetry just as you would punctuate narrative.
Next, eliminate the random line breaks—they are ineffective and are obviously just a gimmick to make your writing look like poetry.
After you have done those things, look at your work again and consider whether it is poetic or just a parag
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