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James do Posted 16 years ago
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But/and in return for?

Hi,

This is my situation:

I sometimes meet a very difficult problem. I don't just accept it. To solve it, I read again and again. I also have to research other problems. It takes me time, and in return, I can uderestand more deeply my problem.

My question is : Can I say "It takes me time, but in return, i can understand more deeply".

"but in return" is a little bit strange to me. But in this case, I emphasize the contrast between two results "takes me time" and "understand more deeply". Could you help me.

Thanks in advance.
  

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Yes, you can say that. "But" makes the listener expect a contrast, which is what you want. " Capitalize the I when you're writing.

  • Yes, you can say that.
  • "But" makes the listener expect a contrast, which is what you want.
  • " Capitalize the I when you're writing.
  • " Including that pause is helpful to the flow of the sentence, and in this particular sentence it actually helps communicate the very idea you're trying to express.
  • So I would certainly leave it in there.
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Yes, you can say that.
"But" makes the listener expect a contrast, which is what you want.
"in return" correctly implies that there is a tradeoff between the two things on either side - "time" and "understanding."

Capitalize the I when you're writing.
I'm not 100% sure if you need the comma after "return." Including that pause is helpful to the flow of the sentence, and in

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