Lenny reaches the end of the hallway and looks around the corner - but just as he does, Jack emerges from a room behind him and knocks him down.
1) Does this read well to you?
2) Does 'but just as he does' need 'so' or 'this' after it?
1) Does this read well to you? Its a bit mundane, but I'm sure it will be fine when we can see the actions instead of reading about them. 2) Does 'but just as he does' need 'so' or 'this' after it?
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1) Does this read well to you? Its a bit mundane, but I'm sure it will be fine when we can see the actions instead of reading about them.
2) Does 'but just as he does' need 'so' or 'this' after it? no