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Jackson6612 Posted 18 years ago
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But in fact they will just be paying for the lagacy created by their forefathers

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01font00You can beat us, you can kill us, you can do whatever you like because it is your time now. When it will be our time, your (next generation)/(generation next) will be wondering why is it going through all such hard experience? But in fact they will just be paying for the lagacy left/created by their forefathers.02font0-
  

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0 01pre 00 Here's my rewrite and I do hope someone gives you a better one! You can beat us, you can kill us, you can do whatever you like because it is your time now. 01i 00But there will come our time_ and your next generation will be wondering why _it is02i 00 (incorrect word order) experiencing all this trouble.

— Ant_222

  • 0 01pre 00 Here's my rewrite and I do hope someone gives you a better one!
  • You can beat us, you can kill us, you can do whatever you like because it is your time now.
  • 01i 00But there will come our time_ and your next generation will be wondering why _it is02i 00 (incorrect word order) experiencing all this trouble.
  • It'll be the legacy of their forefathers they'll be paying for!
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00  Here's my rewrite and I do hope someone  gives  you  a  better    one!      You can beat us, you can kill us, you can do whatever you like    because it is your time now. 01i00But there will  come  our  time_    and your  next  generation  will  be  wondering  why  _it  is02i00    (incorrect word order) experiencing all this trouble. It'll be    the
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01cite10Jackson661212cite10Please correct the following text:12br
11font10You can beat us, you can kill us, you can do whatever you like because it is your time now. When it 11del10will be12del10 11b11font10is 12font12b
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0 Yes, in the first sentence 01i00you02i00 is an aggressor. In the second sentence 01i00your02i00 is a personal pronoun used for the aggressor i.e. 01i00generation of the aggressor02i00.02br
00Do you still find any inconsistency or any other problem with my sentences?0-
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