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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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busy month

Is the comma in the right place?

September was another busy month for the company, with 50 new project wins and 50 project completions.

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Also would it be acceptable to replace the part after the comma with "with 50 projects being won and 50 projects being completed".

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  • Also would it be acceptable to replace the part after the comma with "with 50 projects being won and 50 projects being completed".
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Also would it be acceptable to replace the part after the comma with "with 50 projects being won and 50 projects being completed".
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Is anyone able to help, please? I'm also wondering if this would be correct: September was a busy month for us, with 50 project wins and 50 being completed/50 projects being completed. Thanks
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