Busy intersection
Please help me make the paragraph below sound natural. Thanks a lot.
As the world's most visited tourist attractions, drawing an estimated 50 million visitors annually, Times Square has an amazing sense of place and has earned the nickname “Crossroads of the World.” It is also a busy intersection of art and commerce, where scores of advertisements—electric, neon and illuminated signs vie for viewers' attention.
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There is one mistake in punctuation. I'll leave it as an exercise for you to fix it.
- There is one mistake in punctuation.
- I'll leave it as an exercise for you to fix it.
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There is one mistake in punctuation. I'll leave it as an exercise for you to fix it.
0I corrected the mistake in punctuation as paragraph #1. And I tried to rewrite it as paragraph #2.
Which is better, #1 or #2?
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As the world's most visited tourist attractions, drawing an estimated 50 million visitors annually, Times Square has an amazing sense of place and has earned the nickname "Crossroads of the World." It is also a busy intersection of art and commerc
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