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Oumaima salby Posted 6 years ago
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Business writing

Hello, please I understand the you view but I don't know how to answer these questions and thank you

Revise the following sentences to emphasize the perspective of the audience and the "you" view :

1_To help us process your order with our new database software we need you to go to our website and fill out the customer information required.
2_under a new policy reimbursement of travel expenses will be restricted to those related to work only.
3_to avoid suffering the kinds of monetary losses experienced in the past our credit union now prohibits the catching of double endorsed checks presented by our customers.
4_we are pleased to announce an arrangement with HP that allows us to offer discounted computers in the student bookstore.

  

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Is this what you are referring to? org/article/you-centered-business-style/

  • Is this what you are referring to?
  • org/article/you-centered-business-style/
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Is this what you are referring to?

https://writingcommons.org/article/you-centered-business-style/

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Revise the following sentences to emphasize the perspective of the audience and the "you" view.


I'm not sure what these instructions mean. How about this?

1_To help us process your order with our new database software we need you to go to our website and fill out the customer information required.

You should go to our website and fill out the cust

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