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Asima117 Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Business writing

Hello everyone!!! Could anyone check and correct my business letter(grammar, sentence structure and spelling)?

This is my application for a job...

With this letter I would like to show my interest for working in Travelodge Wellington. I am a student at PIHMS and I would like to become a member of your restaurant. I have read the terms and conditions and dare to say that I have all skills which I refered further.

I have an experience from school where we are doing restaurant and kitchen operations. I have conscientious attitude to job, motivation, willingness, good verbal and nonverbal communication skills. Also I am able to work unsupervised, solve problems and motivate people whom I am working with. I am confident I can do it at that height as you require your attendants to be.

I am willing to start co-operating with you anytime. If you are interested in me please email me on

******** or contact me on number given above.

Yours sincerely

****
  

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Dear Mr [surname], This letter is in application for employment with Travelodge Wellington. I have read your terms and conditions, and I believe that I have the skills you require. I am a student at PIHMS, where I have gained experience in restaurant and kitchen operations.

  • Dear Mr [surname], This letter is in application for employment with Travelodge Wellington.
  • I have read your terms and conditions, and I believe that I have the skills you require.
  • I am a student at PIHMS, where I have gained experience in restaurant and kitchen operations.
  • I am highly motivated and have a conscientious attitude toward work, and I have good verbal and nonverbal communication skills.
  • Also, I am able to work unsupervised, solve problems, and motivate those I work with.
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Dear Mr [surname],

This letter is in application for employment with Travelodge Wellington. I have read your terms and conditions, and I believe that I have the skills you require.

I am a student at PIHMS, where I have gained experience in restaurant and kitchen operations. I am highly motivated and have a conscientious attitude toward work, and I have good verbal and nonverbal c
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There are a few mistakes in it and I would suggest several twicks.

With this
letter I would like to express my interest in working for Travelodge Wellington. I am a student at PIHMS (is what you are studying relevant? If so mention it) and I would like to become a member of your restaurant team.. I am confident that I possess all the skills which

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