Anonymous Posted 13 years agoBusiness & Finance
Business report writting
Which of the following sentences/usages is(are) more grammatically correct?
Or are there better(brief) usages?
Many thanks for helping me!
1.The reason of the increasing of renewal last month was that we announced a price raise.
1-1.The reason of the increasing of renewal last month was that we announced course(s) prices are going to increase.
2.The reason of renewal increasing last month was that we announced a price raise.
2-1.The reason of renewal increasing last month was that we announced course(s) prices are going to increase.
3.The renewal increasing last month was due to (that) we announced course(s) prices are going to increase.
4.That renewal increased last month was due to (that) we announced course(s) prices are going to increase.
5.Is "the increasing of renewal" or "renewal increasing" better?
6.Is "course price", "course prices" or "courses prices" better?