0
Stevenukd Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Business plans

- There have been too many unfeasible business plans, so the company went bankcruptcy / so the company went out of business.

- Are the sentences above grammatical?

Thanks so much to Teachers,

Stevenukd
  

Top answer

Hi, - There have been too many unfeasible business plans, so the company went bankcruptcy / so the company went out of business. - There had been too many unfeasible business plans, so the company went bankrupt / so the company went out of business. It seems a little unnatural.

— Clive

  • Hi, - There have been too many unfeasible business plans, so the company went bankcruptcy / so the company went out of business.
  • - There had been too many unfeasible business plans, so the company went bankrupt / so the company went out of business.
  • It seems a little unnatural.
  • I'd say something like this.
  • The company's business plans were impractical, so it went bankrupt.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

2 Answers
0
Hi,
- There have been too many unfeasible business plans, so the company went bankcruptcy / so the company went out of business.

- There had been too many unfeasible business plans, so the company went bankrupt / so the company went out of business.

It seems a little unnatural. I'd say something like this.

The company's business plans were impractical, so it went ba
0
0
Hi Stevenukd

I've made a couple of suggestions that involve minimal change:

There had been too many unfeasible business plans, so the company went bankrupt.
There had been too many unfeasible business plans, so the company went out of business.

(I also agree with Clive's comments.)
0

Related Questions