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Penelopy Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
Business letter/email
Hello!!
I have to write an business e-mail. I made an outline and now I really need your help. I'd like it to sound more sophisticated and professional. Also I'm not sure about few words and if you find more suitable ones I'd be very thankful. Plus I'm not certan about greetings. This is it:
"We are a Slovenian company, which equips hen farms.
With you, we would like to make a deal to sell your product in Slovenia. We would like to buy floor plates for 140 m2.
Please send us the price and delivery time."
Thank you so much for your reply
I have to write an business e-mail. I made an outline and now I really need your help. I'd like it to sound more sophisticated and professional. Also I'm not sure about few words and if you find more suitable ones I'd be very thankful. Plus I'm not certan about greetings. This is it:
"We are a Slovenian company, which equips hen farms.
With you, we would like to make a deal to sell your product in Slovenia. We would like to buy floor plates for 140 m2.
Please send us the price and delivery time."
Thank you so much for your reply
Top answer
We are a Slovenian company that equips hen farms. We would like to purchase140m2 of your floor plates. This will look more professional if you could be a bit more exact (unless they only sell one type of plate of courst).
- We are a Slovenian company that equips hen farms.
- We would like to purchase140m2 of your floor plates.
- This will look more professional if you could be a bit more exact (unless they only sell one type of plate of courst).
- Is there a product reference or description you could quote.
- For example: W Please quote for price and delivery time of 140m2 Floor Plates 29572A (grey).
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We are a Slovenian company that equips hen farms.
We would like to purchase140m2 of your floor plates.
This will look more professional if you could be a bit more exact (unless they only sell one type of plate of courst). Is there a product reference or description you could quote. For example:
W
Please quote for price and delivery time of
140m2 Floor Pla
We would like to purchase140m2 of your floor plates.
This will look more professional if you could be a bit more exact (unless they only sell one type of plate of courst). Is there a product reference or description you could quote. For example:
W
Please quote for price and delivery time of
140m2 Floor Pla
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