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Happyhour123 Posted 13 years ago
Business & Finance

Business Letter - Help !

Please be informed we would like to request for domain password and terminate the domain name registration with Pacnet Internet (S) Pte Ltd, we will transfer the service to ILap Pte Ltd.

Thank you.

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Not good. I'm not clear about what you want. Perhaps you mean this?

— Clive

  • Not good.
  • I'm not clear about what you want.
  • Perhaps you mean this?
  • We would like to request a domain password.
  • We also wish to terminate the domain name registration with Pacnet Internet (S) Pte Ltd.
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Not good.

I'm not clear about what you want. Perhaps you mean this?

We would like to request a domain password.
We also wish to terminate the domain name registration with Pacnet Internet (S) Pte Ltd. We will transfer the service to ILap P
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I mean I would like to write a letter to cancel the service with them

Please be informed we would like to request for domain password and terminate the domain name registration with Pacnet Internet (S) Pte Ltd, the service will be transferring to ILap Pte Ltd. ( is it better?)
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You can say 'Please be informed' if you want to, but it just makes you seem like a person who likes to use dreary business jargon.

We would like to terminate our service for domain name Pacnet Internet (S) Pte Ltd. The service will be transferring to ILap Pte Ltd.

Do you need to
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yes, just for their information that we are transfferring not termina the service
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