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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing

Business letter


Dear sir,

This is to inform you that we are ruturning your bills for correction.

Regards

sneha
  

Top answer

Hi, This seems very terse. Don't you want to say what is incorrect about them? Don't you want to add a little bit of politeness?

— Clive

  • Hi, This seems very terse.
  • Don't you want to say what is incorrect about them?
  • Don't you want to add a little bit of politeness?
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

This seems very terse. Don't you want to say what is incorrect about them? Don't you want to add a little bit of politeness?

Best wishes, Clive
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