I need help with a business introduction letter to potential clients worldwide. I don't want to come off as novice or desperate but as some one who knows what their company is doing. I have copied some of the formats in the forum but would love for my version to be reviewed, criticized and corrected to make more sense to potential clients. thanks
this is my version
Dear Sir or Madam:
We would like to take this opportunity to briefly introduce our company Skrohl Inc, USA So that you may consider adding our company to your list of approved suppliers. Skrohl Inc is a web based retail company founded on the principles of providing customers with high quality products by integrating style, innovation and technology, at a great value, with exceptional customer service. Our Product is the Sk-12 Mobile phone watch, which gives you the portability of a digital watch integrated with a Mobile phone on your wrist. Our SK-12 come in a variety of colors.The Phone functions include place and receive CALLS, SMS, MMS, Camera and Video recording, FM, MP3,Wap browser functions and more. Our products is designed to suit everyone needs. Our attention to detail and our friendly, experienced and fully insured staff have managed to create a thriving business with an impeccable reputation. We bring you most advanced methods of cellphone technology with our SK-12 Mobile phone watch products. We are currently working on more product line soon to be released later this year. We are interested in establishing lasting mutual business relationship that will benefit both our companies financially and economically. We believe by adding our products into your current product line would be a huge benefit to your organization and especially to your customers.
Our plan is to establish Skrohl brand in your country and at the same time provide variety of new and innovative products into your product line to give your customer wide selection to choose from, which in turn increases your product line revenue. Our Sk-12 mobile phone watches can also be a good promotional product to create momentum and buzz which can be used to entice current and potential customer and make them aware of any new product your company is planning on launching. If you have any questions or concerns, please contact me at 011-987-987-9874. I or one of our representatives will contact you during the next 10 days to ensure that you have received our information and to address any oust anding issues. Thank you very much for considering our request.
Sincerely,
Skrohl Inc.
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