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Hanyattalah Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

Business email

Dear Teachers,


coulsd you please correct the following message for me :


Dear Sirs,

Please note that the vessel berthing prospects will clear once Port Authority
Berthing Comittee is held tommorow

Best Regards

Anothor question i would like to ask , are there alternitaves other than the phrases
(please note that , please be advised that, please be informed that) i can use when i
start my business emails.



Thanks
  

Top answer

I'm not too sure what you mean by berthing prospects but it's mostly ok assuming that everyone receiving the e-mail knows what these are. the Port Authority... tomorrow

— Nona the brit

  • I'm not too sure what you mean by berthing prospects but it's mostly ok assuming that everyone receiving the e-mail knows what these are.
  • the Port Authority...
  • tomorrow
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I'm not too sure what you mean by berthing prospects but it's mostly ok assuming that everyone receiving the e-mail knows what these are.

Other changes:
...the Port Authority...
tomorrow
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