Business communication

hey guys, I just wanted some comments on a letter that I am suppose to hand in soon. I just need people to critique my letter and give some advice. I am going to only paste the body of the letter. Its an invitation letter btw.


Re: Launch of Business Communication And Consultant Limited



The Business Communication And Consultant Limited would like to invite your company to attend our grand opening ceremony on April 24, 2017 at 9:00 am at the Business Communication And Consultant Head Office located at Hampton Dist., Montego Bay, St. James



Our company seeks to provide effective and quality service and equipment that helps to fulfill your communication needs and build your company towards success. We intend on starting our operations in Montego Bay and would love for you to be a part of memorable event.



We know that effective writing and speaking are the key qualities that help build a company and we can both work together to propel our businesses towards excellence. This event will be the stepping stone for a prosperous relationship and we look forward to your attendance.



Thank you for doing business with us





Yours Sincerely,









___________________

Matthew Scott

Marketing Manager