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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Bus terminal

Could you please check which of the following sentences is better, and improve on it if possible?

1) Exit the arrival lobby and walk toward the bus terminal.
Cross the street on the crosswalk to the parking lot of buses bound for nearby hotels.

2) Exit the arrival lobby and walk toward the bus terminal.
Cross the street via the crosswalk to the bus parking bound for nearby hotels.
  

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1) Exit the arrival lobby and walk toward the bus terminal. Cross the street at the crosswalk to the parking area for buses bound for nearby hotels. 2) Exit the arrival lobby and walk toward the bus terminal.

— Mister Micawber

  • 1) Exit the arrival lobby and walk toward the bus terminal.
  • Cross the street at the crosswalk to the parking area for buses bound for nearby hotels.
  • 2) Exit the arrival lobby and walk toward the bus terminal.
  • Cross the street via the crosswalk to the buses bound for nearby hotels.
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1) Exit the arrival lobby and walk toward the bus terminal.
Cross the street at the crosswalk to the parking area for buses bound for nearby hotels.

2) Exit the arrival lobby and walk toward the bus terminal.
Cross the street via the crosswalk to the buses bound for nearby hotels.
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