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Angliholic Posted 19 years ago
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burst into overwhelming complaining
My student wrote:
No sooner had the waiter come than Mary burst into overwhelming complaining. She roared so hard that her face was full of anger. Such an unprecedented behavior destroyed the perfect impression John had seen.
My suggestion:
No sooner had the waiter come than Mary burst out complaining overwhelingly. She roared so hard that her face was twisted. Such an uncommon behavior ruined the perfect impression John had of her.
If there is anything wrong, feel free to correct me. Thanks.
No sooner had the waiter come than Mary burst into overwhelming complaining. She roared so hard that her face was full of anger. Such an unprecedented behavior destroyed the perfect impression John had seen.
My suggestion:
No sooner had the waiter come than Mary burst out complaining overwhelingly. She roared so hard that her face was twisted. Such an uncommon behavior ruined the perfect impression John had of her.
If there is anything wrong, feel free to correct me. Thanks.
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Hi, No sooner had the waiter come than Mary burst into overwhelming complaining . She roared so hard that her face was full of anger . Such an unprecedented behavior destroyed the perfect impression John had seen .
- Hi, No sooner had the waiter come than Mary burst into overwhelming complaining .
- She roared so hard that her face was full of anger .
- Such an unprecedented behavior destroyed the perfect impression John had seen .
- My suggestion: No sooner had the waiter come than Mary burst out complaining overwhel m ingly .
- She roared so hard that her face was twisted .
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Hi,
No sooner had the waiter come than Mary burst into overwhelming complaining. She roared so hard that her face was full of anger. Such an unprecedented behavior destroyed the perfect impression John had seen.
My suggestion:
No sooner had the waiter come than Mary bu
No sooner had the waiter come than Mary burst into overwhelming complaining. She roared so hard that her face was full of anger. Such an unprecedented behavior destroyed the perfect impression John had seen.
My suggestion:
No sooner had the waiter come than Mary bu
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