As I was hiding in the dark, tiny room, which I could barely fit in, I bumped into something which made a loud noise.
1) Is "bumped into something" fitting here even though "I" doesn't move much or is it too forceful-sounding?
2) Is the sentence grammatical?
anonymous 1) Is "bumped into something" fitting here even though "I" doesn't move much or is it too forceful-sounding? It sounds OK to me. anonymous 2) Is the sentence grammatical?
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anonymous1) Is "bumped into something" fitting here even though "I" doesn't move much or is it too forceful-sounding?
It sounds OK to me.
anonymous2) Is the sentence grammatical?
Yes. I'd leave out the comma before 'which', but you don't have to.
CJ