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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Bullet points

I'm never sure how to introduce bullet points and then go on to write the bullet points. Is it acceptble to say the following:

Here are some of the benefits of attending the event:

- Learn about the future of marketing
- Network with other marketing professionals

Or should it be:

Here are some of the benefits of attending the event:

- You will learn about the future of marketing.
- There will be an opportunity to network with other marketing professionals.

Many thanks
  

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Anonymous Here are some of the benefits of attending the event:- Learn about the future of marketing- Network with other marketing professionals The two bullet points do not flow tremendously well from the initial sentence. - There will be an opportunity to network with other marketing professionals. This flows better, but could become laborious.

  • Anonymous Here are some of the benefits of attending the event:- Learn about the future of marketing- Network with other marketing professionals The two bullet points do not flow tremendously well from the initial sentence.
  • - There will be an opportunity to network with other marketing professionals.
  • This flows better, but could become laborious.
  • You could consider introducing the bullet points something like this: At the event you will be have the opportunity to: - Learn about the future of marketing - Network with other marketing professionals ...
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AnonymousHere are some of the benefits of attending the event:- Learn about the future of marketing- Network with other marketing professionals
The two bullet points do not flow tremendously well from the initial sentence.
AnonymousHere are some of the benefits of attending the event:- You will learn about the future of marketing.-
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GPYAt the event you will be have the opportunity to:
Sorry, I mistyped it. I meant "you will have the opportunity to"
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Thank you for your help

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