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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Building sentences..?
hi all,
i am not sure of my para in grammar and building sentences???
" In my view on integration for students with disabilities, I disagree to integrate with regular classroom. The best place for children with special needs, in my opinion, is at a special needs school. Children who are categorized as special needs suffer from a learning disability of a particular kind. There are many disorders such as Down syndrome, Epilepsy, Attention Deficit disorder, Cerebral palsy, Dyslexia and Autism and each of these disabilities has its own symptoms. Children who suffer from one of these are known as special needs only because they would need more attention than an average child. A special needs school makes a special assessment of children where they are placed in an appropriate grade according to their abilities. Whereas if you have children with special needs learning in a regular school, they will be provided with an exam that would be in agreement to their age group as well as their last grade.
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i am not sure of my para in grammar and building sentences???
" In my view on integration for students with disabilities, I disagree to integrate with regular classroom. The best place for children with special needs, in my opinion, is at a special needs school. Children who are categorized as special needs suffer from a learning disability of a particular kind. There are many disorders such as Down syndrome, Epilepsy, Attention Deficit disorder, Cerebral palsy, Dyslexia and Autism and each of these disabilities has its own symptoms. Children who suffer from one of these are known as special needs only because they would need more attention than an average child. A special needs school makes a special assessment of children where they are placed in an appropriate grade according to their abilities. Whereas if you have children with special needs learning in a regular school, they will be provided with an exam that would be in agreement to their age group as well as their last grade.
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Top answer
I have two main suggestions. First, you need a more effective and grammatically correct opening sentence. Second, you are over-capitalizating (only Down syndrome or Down's syndrome is correctly capitalized since it refers to a person's name).
- I have two main suggestions.
- First, you need a more effective and grammatically correct opening sentence.
- Second, you are over-capitalizating (only Down syndrome or Down's syndrome is correctly capitalized since it refers to a person's name).
- My substitutions are the color bar words.
- The cross-outs or dark-highlighted letters are my deletions.
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I have two main suggestions. First, you need a more effective and grammatically correct opening sentence. Second, you are over-capitalizating (only Down syndrome or Down's syndrome is correctly capitalized since it refers to a person's name).
My substitutions are the color bar words. The cross-outs or dark-highlighted lett
My substitutions are the color bar words. The cross-outs or dark-highlighted lett
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