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Minnaloushe Posted 12 years ago
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Buddhism

Could you correct my writing as below? Many thanks!

I consider Buddhsim as one of most peaceful pholosophies in the world, instead of being religion in my perspective.

First, I venture to say Buddhism is virtually atheism. It doesn't worship any deities in the universe. There's no god or goddess in the world, which rules the masses unlike religions.

"Buddha" refers to enlightment, instead of any dieties. The essence of Buddhism underscores Bodi is the genuine nature of humans no matter people are intelligent or not. Once we aware the genuine nature of ourselves, we are Buddhas per se.

Second, it is different to other religions which teach God, Allah lie in our heart, in the universe. Buddhism doesn't admit there's anything in Buddhas' hearts. It is correct for Christians or Muslims to say God /Allahs in their hearts, but it is wrong for enlighted people to say "Buddha is in their hearts" because Buddhism teaches the world and people are about just phantoms, illusions. People should not preoccupy with anything. It teaches people to aware Bodi inside (our nature), instead of worshipping any made-Buddhas enshrined in any Buddhist temples or look for Buddha over heaven above in vain. That is misinterpreted by numerous Budhist practists from monks to its secular followers who kneel down before the made so-called Buddha statues, and pray for peace, fortune, blessing, love. As people are preoocupied with the earthly vanity, it is unlikely to free themselves.

Yet, I don't agree with ascetic practice about sex and veganism. Sex is the way how human world survives. Asceticism is against the nature of humans to become vegans, as there are not vegan tigers or lions in the world either.
  
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