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Anbal Posted 11 years ago
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Brush my english

When we got engaged I was doing my post graduation.one day my mom told me that somebody is coming to see me on account of marriage. I was not quite happy or u can say,feeling its too early for me to marry.but when I met him first time I was totally changed.somehow, later realized whatever happens , happen for good and finally we got engaged and now happily married and blessed with two kids.
  

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You need to correct the places I highlighted in yellow. Be careful to form good sentences and not make your sentences too long. on e day my mom told me that somebody is coming to see me on account of marriage.

— AlpheccaStars

  • You need to correct the places I highlighted in yellow.
  • Be careful to form good sentences and not make your sentences too long.
  • on e day my mom told me that somebody is coming to see me on account of marriage.
  • s omehow, later I realized whatever happens , happen for good and finally we got engaged and now I am happily married and blessed with two kids.
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You need to correct the places I highlighted in yellow. Be careful to form good sentences and not make your sentences too long.

When we got engaged, I was doing my post graduation.one day my mom told me that somebody is coming to see me on ac
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I'll try my best to make short sentences.pls whatever you have marked or highlighted ,would you b able to make the correction. Thanks for guiding me.
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You need to try to make the corrections yourself.
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anbalpls
This is not a word. Please, is.
anbalwould you b
"b" is a letter, not a word.

If you want to improve your English, you should write words properly and limit textspeak http://www.urbandictionary.com/defi
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Also, I'm not sure why your topic title is "Brush my English?" You can '"brush up on your English," (review, practice, improve) but you can't just brush it. And no one can brush up on something for someone else.
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Might be you are right but I feel if somebody will check my texts It will be a great help to refine my English.Teachers and friends like you ,would be a great help.Its my point of veiw that if I am not well,I have to go to doctor to recover yourself from the illness.otherwise, your health will suffer .I hope you understand.Anyways ,your suggestions and tips are always welcome.
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It might be that you are right but I feel that if somebody would will check my texts, it would will be a great help in refining my English.Teachers and friends like you , (no comma) would be a great help.It's my p
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Thanks for checking my text.I am so happy to added my self in this fourm.May *** bless you with the best in life.regards
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Thanks for checking my text.I am so happy that I added myself to this forum.May *** bless you with the best in life.regards
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