Broken CSAT system

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Broken CSAT system.

"There were 30 people that don't satisfied the condition to become a person who contributes questions for the national academic aptitude test" said the board of Audit and Inspection. 12 people of them are not the instructor. 13 people of them do not have a career of working in high school for 5year. That is surprising that the investigators who have children is a volunteer to CSAT worked.

All student and their parents want only high CSAT score because that is the most important thing to enter a college. To become a winner or looser depend on just 1 or 2 point. The score is important things like that. We would not trust the exam if the system of the test is weak. There are so many weak point of CSAT we found. There was two answer to one questions. A college invitation professor ,who work in internet college enterance site, sat the examination paper example from his thesis.

There are most the investigator from same college. The highschool teacher as investigator from the national capital region is most of them. There was no meeting to investigate a capacity as a person who contributes questions for the exam. We found that The investigator was not recommanded by the list but suggested by an information or personal relationships. Some people guess that they are related with a institution peoples.

Accordingly, the Bord of Audit and Inspection make a public know what was going on. There is a responsible to the bord of valuation and the ministry of Education. Introducing a problem banking system and Human power system need to be done some other time. If we just ignore this problem, the CSAT system would be broken.

GuyD · Accepted Answer

Below is a rewrite. I had to guess at the meaning of some parts of your essay. I know that certain things are lost in translation. I hope that my rewrite is helpful.

I think you make your point well.
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"There were thirty people who don't satisfy the requirements for contributing questions for the National Academic Aptitude Test," said the Board of Audit and Inspection. Twelve of these thirty are not instructors, and thirteen have less than five years' teaching experience in high school. That some of those who submit questions have children being tested also seems to be a clear conflict of interest.

All student and their parents want as high a CSAT score as possible since this is the most important consideration for college entrance. The difference between a winner and a looser can be a little as one or two points, which is why the score is so important.

The CSAT exam cannot be trusted if the system behind it is weak. For instance, it was found that one question can have two different answers. A college admissions professor, who uses the College Entrance Internet site, has pointed out this weakness of the exam.

There are others, mostly from high schools in the region, looking into these deficiencies. In one instance, they found that the selection process for persons, who submit questions, to be severely flawed, since none were interviewed face to face. In another, they found that most of the investigators were from the same college, being mostly from the national capital region. They likewise found that no effort was made to determine the qualifications of those who contributes questions for the exam. And finally, they found that those chosen to submit questions were based more on personal relationships than on any set of guidlines. Some people chosen were not even related to an institution.

The Board of Audit and Inspection, which is responsible to the Board of Evaluation and the Ministry of Education, has make public its findings. As a result of the investigation, the problems found will be addressed in the future. To ignore the problems will only continue to undermine the CSAT system.

Pdh0224 · Answer

Hello, GuyD

Thank you for your rewrite.

It was helpful to me.

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