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ElenaBahrain Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Brochure about my company

Hello!
I don't know if i'm at the right place but i hope soEmotion: smile Right now i'm preparing for the first exhibition. I have a new company: we do furniture, sell doors, sundeck etc. So i made a brochure with information about us, and before i give it ti print i want somebody to check if i made any mistakes in it. Thank you in advance!!!

There is a text:

(name of the company) is proud to present for you high-quality room doors, laminated furniture, components for furniture production, sundeck and siding panels.
All our materials meet the highest requirements, and the design will please the most sophisticated customers.
(name of the company):

-best quality

-modern design

european technology

You will be impressed by the quality of our material,
professionalism of our service and beautiful look of all goods that we make…

1) High-quality room doors. 18 models, different designs, all possible sizes, variety of colors. Fire rated and water resistant options. Easy to install, perfect for heavy duty use, our doors produced due to E-1 standards, with sound and humidity isolation at the maximum level
2) Individual designed laminated furniture. Anything you can image: just send us a picture or choose from our website, and we will offer for you the best options. We give 10-years guaranty for lamination finishing and we are sure that you will be surprised by our low prices for excellent furniture
3) Renovation for your kitchen and other furniture. Economical way to give a new and modern look for your house. All you need, just choose the color of front doors and give us a measurement. Great option for semi- and fully-furnished buildings and hotels.
4) Sundeck and siding panels for the swimming pool, gardens and walking paths, beaches,
terraces and verandas. Resistant to natural conditions, water and humidity.
Easy to assemble, labor-saving
5) For carpentry shops and other manufacturers we offer a laminated components for your furniture production. Great various of our components will help you to make any costumer satisfied. We have:
- Profiles. Over 60 forms such as sides, door-frames, skirting, corners, surfaces and table legs
- Panel doors. Different forms, sizes and colors will open for you new horizons in furniture production

We make your dreams come true…

5%
discount for the bearer of this brochure!!!

Thank you again!
  

Top answer

Here are my suggestions (in bold): (name of the company) is proud to offer present for you high-quality room doors, laminated furniture, components for furniture production, sundeck and siding panels. All our materials meet the highest standards requirements , and our the design s will please the most sophisticated customers. (name of the company): -best quality -modern design -E uropean technology You will be impressed by the quality of our material, the professionalism of our service, and the beauty beautiful look of all goods that we make… For example, we offer 1) High-quality room doors.

  • Here are my suggestions (in bold): (name of the company) is proud to offer present for you high-quality room doors, laminated furniture, components for furniture production, sundeck and siding panels.
  • All our materials meet the highest standards requirements , and our the design s will please the most sophisticated customers.
  • (name of the company): -best quality -modern design -E uropean technology You will be impressed by the quality of our material, the professionalism of our service, and the beauty beautiful look of all goods that we make… For example, we offer 1) High-quality room doors.
  • 18 models, different designs, all possible sizes, in a variety of colors.
  • Fire - rated and water - resistant options.
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Here are my suggestions (in bold):


(name of the company) is proud to offer present for you high-quality room doors, laminated furniture, components for furniture production, sundeck and siding panels.
All our materials meet the highest standards requirements, and our the designs will please the most sophisticate
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Dear Doctor D:
There is no way to explain how I appreciate what you've done for me!
Thank you so much!!!
Good luck in all your beginnings!
Elena

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