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Contiluo Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary
broad mind
Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!
My hobby is painting, which changes my life. Painting is a language of expressing creative thoughts. It benefits me thinking creatively with a broad mind. I gain self-esteem and a confidence I never knew I possessed. Through painting I discover in myself a greater awareness of the beauty of nature.
My hobby is painting, which changes my life. Painting is a language of expressing creative thoughts. It benefits me thinking creatively with a broad mind. I gain self-esteem and a confidence I never knew I possessed. Through painting I discover in myself a greater awareness of the beauty of nature.
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Painting is the language of creative mind . It helps me by broadening my thoughts . I gain self-esteem and confidence I never knew I possessed.
- Painting is the language of creative mind .
- It helps me by broadening my thoughts .
- I gain self-esteem and confidence I never knew I possessed.
- Through painting I discover in myself a greater awareness/ appreciation of the beauty of nature.
- Your thoughts are really true.
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My hobby is painting, which changes (think of another verb, like brighten,for changes in simple present implies your life is ever changing, You don't mean that, do you?) my life .Painting is the language of creati
My hobby is painting, which changes (think of another verb, like brighten,for changes in simple present implies your life is ever changing, You don't mean that, do you?) my life .Painting is the language of creati
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