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Kooyeen Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Britney Spears

Hi,
this was written by a 17-year-old American girl.

What do you expect, she's Britney Spears sister. At least she's having some heart to keep the baby instead of having abortion.

I'd like to hear some comments from you. If possible, don't just say "This is wrong, period" or "It's ok, period"... If you can give a complete opinion on how it sound to American ears, I'll appreciate it.
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I'd suggest: What do you expect, she's Britney Spears's sister. At least she's showing some heart by keeping the baby instead of having an abortion.

  • I'd suggest: What do you expect, she's Britney Spears's sister.
  • At least she's showing some heart by keeping the baby instead of having an abortion.
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I'd suggest:

What do you expect, she's Britney Spears's sister. At least she's showing some heart by keeping the baby instead of having an abortion.
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Hi,
thanks. I don't want to change the verbs or words anyway, just get some comments on it.

I don't understand why it's "Britney Spears sister" ans not "Britney Spears's sister" (= pronounced Spearses sister).

And why she says "She's having some heart". I always hear these continuous tenses where prescriptive grammar would forbid them. Like "I can finally buy that sweater
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You're right about that one. Edited my posting.
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I was posting too.
Anyway, I'm not sure I'm right, because I just looked for some video about that, on Youtube, because I wanted to "hear" it. It turned out on CBS they said "Britney Spears sister", not "Spears's".
KooyeenHi,
thanks. I don't want to change the verbs or words anyway, just get some comments on it.

I don't understand why it's "Britney Spea
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Ok, I just searched the net, and it's definitely not "Spears's". I wonder why. Don't you say Mike Jones's house? Or can I alos say Mike Jones' house?
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Hello K.,

I would take "Britney Spears sister" as a typo for "Britney Spears' sister". (You can say "Spears's" too.)

"She's having some heart to" is not a phrase I've ever heard; but it's intelligible, and conveys both "she has the courage to" and "she is good-hearted enough to". It could well be the speaker's own coinage, or the result of a mis-edit.

"Having an abortio
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>"Britney Spears' sister". (You can say "Spears's" too.)

I agree with MrP here.
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KooyeenAnyway, I'm not sure I'm right, because I just looked for some video about that, on Youtube, because I wanted to "hear" it. It turned out on CBS they said "Britney Spears sister", not "Spears's".
Hi Kooyeen

You may be interested in what Otto Jespersen says about the genitive in his Essentials of English Grammar:

"While we h
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In one of the weirder sections of the AP Stylebook, it talks about using that 's at the end of words that end in S (not the classical names of Moses, Hercules, etc.) except when the word that followed started with an S as well. So Britney Spears's brother but Spears' sister. Frankly, that one ends up making half your stuff look like you've made a typo.

As with most matters of styl
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Hi guys,

What do you expect, she's Britney Spears sister.

Apart from the 'genitive' consideration, I'd expect this to be written as What do you expect? She's . . .'

As a wild generalization, I wouldn't necessarily expect people who are interested in Britney's sister's pregnancy to be greatly concerned abo

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