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If the US government took a more active policy to solve the economic problems, the diffrent result would be brought about. That is, it wouldn't have caused another global economic crisis.
  

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I have underlined some problems: If the US government took ( this verb does not match the verb in your next sentence ) a more active policy to solve the economic problems, the diffrent result would be brought about ( Recast this last part) . That is, it wouldn't have caused another global economic crisis.

  • I have underlined some problems: If the US government took ( this verb does not match the verb in your next sentence ) a more active policy to solve the economic problems, the diffrent result would be brought about ( Recast this last part) .
  • That is, it wouldn't have caused another global economic crisis.
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I have underlined some problems:

If the US government took (this verb does not match the verb in your next sentence) a more active policy to solve the economic problems, the diffrent result would be brought about (Recast this last part). That is, it wouldn't have caused another global economic crisis.
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I am sorry I don't understand what you mean.

What do you mean?
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You need to fix all the parts that I underlined.

Either 'took' or 'wouldn't have caused' must be changed.
'result...about' should be rewritten in different words.
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had taken

would not have caused

would have been brought about
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would have been brought about-- No. 'There would have been (a) different result(s)

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