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Alc24 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
BRIGHTEN and DIM VERB???
Could you tell me if these sentences work and are natural?
- The light from the screen doesn't brighten or dim as much on the old computers as on the new ones.
- The light from screen dims and brightens more on the new ones than old ones.
Thank you
- The light from the screen doesn't brighten or dim as much on the old computers as on the new ones.
- The light from screen dims and brightens more on the new ones than old ones.
Thank you
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alc24 The light from the screen doesn't brighten or dim as much on the old computers as on the new ones. - The light from screen dims and brightens more on the new ones than old ones. The first one is fine.
- alc24 The light from the screen doesn't brighten or dim as much on the old computers as on the new ones.
- - The light from screen dims and brightens more on the new ones than old ones.
- The first one is fine.
- The second sentence is missing a few words: The light from the screen dims and brightens more on the new ones than on the old ones.
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alc24 The light from the screen doesn't brighten or dim as much on the old computers as on the new ones.The first one is fine. The second sentence is missing a few words: The light from the screen dims and brightens more on the new ones than on the old ones.
- The light from screen dims and brightens more on the new ones than old ones.
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If you want another version:
The light of the old computer screen could not be made as bright nor as dim as the light of the new screen.
The light from the screen dims and brightens more on the new computer than the old.
The light of the old computer screen could not be made as bright nor as dim as the light of the new screen.
The light from the screen dims and brightens more on the new computer than the old.
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