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Thedynamix Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

Brevity in this sentence..

Just trying to get my head around the word "brevity".

Does this sentence make correct use of the words:

"The interview has been paraphrased for brevity, below:".

Thanks guys!
  

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Hi, Just trying to get my head around the word "brevity". Does this sentence make correct use of the words: "The interview has been paraphrased for brevity, below:". This is OK, although in this example it would be more natural to say 'the interview has been summarized'.

  • Hi, Just trying to get my head around the word "brevity".
  • Does this sentence make correct use of the words: "The interview has been paraphrased for brevity, below:".
  • This is OK, although in this example it would be more natural to say 'the interview has been summarized'.
  • 'Brevity' is not a word that I hear every day.
  • What is common is the word 'brief', eg 'Here is some brief information about the interview'.
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Hi,

Just trying to get my head around the word "brevity".

Does this sentence make correct use of the words:

"The interview has been paraphrased for brevity, below:".


This is OK, although in this example it would be more natural to say 'the interview has been summarized'.

'Brevity' is not a word that I hear every day. What
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Ok, gotcha.. Have a look at this sentence and tell me what you think (it might be a little inflated..):

"In addition to the formal system objectives, specifically formed interview questions aim to identify the user requirements for both sets of users which are:"

Thank you!
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Hi,

"In addition to the formal system objectives, specifically formed interview questions aim to identify the user requirements for both sets of users, which are:"

I assume that 'which' refers to 'sets of users'. In that case, say 'who are'.

Clive


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Good spot, thank you so much!
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Hi,

When I worked in the computer business, we identified the user requirements before we decided on the system requirements.

You don't do it that way?

Clive
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Hey,

Erm, I kinda haven't no.

In the beginning I state the aim, and then the objectives (overall) to meet the aim (whih is basically the project brief).

And requirements was the wrong work. I meant objectives. So we tell the reader what we're making, then we tell them "how" we're making it, from the user requirements.

That's the way I thought was most logical I

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