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I can't put words to how much I've loved and babied this watch from the get-go, but it certainly is a looker. It's a very well made watch by Breitling and the design itself is truly a classic. I now know why they named it Superocean HERITAGE. The blue and Creme is probably my favorite colorway out of all the designs. This watch is sharp and exudes prestige when you wear it right. I could flatter it all day, but it comes down to really physically seeing it and holding it in your hands, then you'll know exactly why it's so hard to part ways with it.

Please proofread. Thank you.

CalifJim · Accepted Answer

PreciousJonesI can't put words to how much I've loved and babied this watch from the get-go, but it certainly is a looker. It's a very well made watch by Breitling and the design itself is truly a classic. I now know why they named it Superocean HERITAGE. The blue and Creme is probably my favorite colorway out of all the designs. This watch is sharp and exudes prestige when you wear it right. I could flatter it all day, but it comes down to really physically seeing it and holding it in your hands, then you'll know exactly why it's so hard to part ways with it.

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I can't put into words how much I've loved and babied this watch from the get-go, but it certainly is a looker. It's a very well made watch by Breitling, and the design itself is truly a classic. I now know why they named it Superocean HERITAGE. The blue and Creme¹ is probably my favorite colorway out of all the designs. This watch is sharp and exudes prestige when you wear it right. I could flatter² it all day, but it really comes down to seeing it and physically holding it in your hands. Then you'll know exactly why it's so hard to part ways with it.

¹I don't know why you capitalized Creme, but not blue. Something is strange there.
²'flatter' is usually used only with people, but you might get away with it here.
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The style is quite a bit more effusive than your usual. What's got into you?

CJ

PreciousJones · Answer

CalifJimThe style is quite a bit more effusive than your usual. What's got into you?

It's not my writing. My friend asked me to proofread it for him and I'm afraid I wouldn't be able to do a good enough job, so I posted it here. I asked him to get his own account, but he's too lazy to do the registration, and he says that he's not going to use it.

CalifJim · Answer

PreciousJonesIt's not my writing.

Aha! I thought something like that was happening.

Encourage him not to be so lazy!

CJ

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